Letter 1
Dear Lisa,
I read your blog and I think it's pretty good! But I do have some points where I think it's good to work on. First thing is that you need to look at the way you spell things, I don't think that you do this on purpose but that you working too fast and because of that you made some mistakes. For example, you wrote 'som' instead of 'some' and 'for' instead of 'four'. Also you wrote 'both' wrong most of the time (you wrote it as 'bouth"). Last thing that I want to say is that you have to work on your articles. For example you wrote ' a accident' instead of an accident, 'an live' instead of a live. Okay so those are the points where you could work on. I'll write you soon!
Kind Regards,
Tessa
Letter 2
Dear Lisa,
Thanks for the commentary on my blog! I didn't knew you were dyslexic sorry but even though you're dyslexic, it's hard to find mistakes! There aren't big mistakes in your blog so that’s good but try to focus on your typos and then it will be really good. And yes I know there are mistakes in my blog like skipped letters and that’s because of that I want to work too fast but it's hard to work fast on the iPad haha. I'll try to work on that and I'll change it! Okay so about your blog, maybe it's nice to have some pictures on your blog (if you don't want this, don't haha) so it will look in my opinion better. Keep up the good work!
Kind Regards,
Tessa
Letter 3
Dear Lisa,
Hey I thought it's time for another letter so here it is haha. Okay for this letter I'm going to look at your 'families in the Netherlands’ text. Okay so the first thing that caught my eye was that you wrote ' of one of more children ' but I think you meant one OR more but this can be a typo. Second thing is this sentence: 'You have families with mom and dad but also families with two dads and two moms.' The end of this sentence is correct but the beginning doesn't sound correct to me to be honest. If I were you I'd say it like: You have families with a mom and a dad'. In your part where you're talking about 'Maintenance obligation' you forgot to put a capital at the beginning of the sentence. When you're talking about organizations you have to write each word with a capital so it's not: 'Centrum of youth (CJG)' but Centrum Of Youth. So that's it for this letter. Hope to see a letter from you soon.
Kind Regards,
Tessa
Letter 4
Dear Lisa,
Yes I've heard about the terrorist attacks in Brussels and yes, I think that the Netherlands will be next because it started with Paris then Brussels and I think The Hague or Amsterdam will be next! I think we have to be lucky that the last bomb didn't explode because maybe that would make more victims even though it wasn't the worst bomb.
Okay different topic, what do you think of the association thing with Ukraine and Europe? I think it is good for both parties because they are not going to be a part of Europe and it is good for the economy of the Netherlands because we can trade stuff with them. Would you vote in favor of this or would you vote against the association? I would like to hear your opinion on this topic!
Kind regards,
Tessa
p.s. You wrote "to late" but it's " too late" haha.
Letter 5
Dear Lisa,
Thanks for your letter and interest haha. Okay so you asked about my music and clothing style, well, most of the people would say that I'm 'emo', gothic' or Satanist haha but I prefer being called Alternative because words like emo sound really negative and I don't think having another style means that it is a negative thing. About my music style, I can listen to any kind of music but my favorite genres are rock and metal. I usually spend my spare time on gaming and going to concerts, I've already been to 6 concerts this year oops. When I grow up I would love to be a trooper at Schiphol and fight against terrorism and stuff like that. About your question if I want to get married and have kids, nope, I'm not good with kids and I think marriage is a waste of money. So yeah that's enough about me, what are your future plans and hobbies?! I would love to hear something from you!
Kind Regards,
Tessa
Letter 6
Dear Lisa,
Thanks for the criticism on the task and you were right, didn't fits better than doesn't and I should work on the punctuations haha! I'm going to change as soon as possible. For this letter I'm going to look at the 'music was my first love' task. Okay the first mistake that I've found is that you wrote 'goverment' but it is 'goverNment' but this could be a typo haha. Another mistake that I've found is that you wrote 'deaoderand' instead of deodorant but because you're dyslexic I don't blame you! Okay I'm going to stop with correct you because the only mistakes that I can find are simple typos. This is a really positive thing because I just can't find grammar mistakes and with your dyslexia I think that's pretty awesome. Well, this is my last letter. It was fun to work with you and I think that we both have learn something about the English language but also about each other!
Kind regards,
Tessa