Letter 1:
Dear Tessa,
First of all I want to say that it is really fun to be pared up with you for a change. You are really good in English and I like your writing skills. And if you are presenting your speaking skills are also very good. I read your travelguide and I have a few things to say. First off your text is really informativ but also boring. And sometimes you are starting to make a joke but then you switch back to the informativ/boring side. But yeah you did not choose your own subject so. But the rest of you task is beautiful said. Like I said before I love you writing style becayse it is very easy to read, so I mean with that not diffcult words. Well done with your task and I look forward to reading more.
Kind regards,
Lisa
Letter 2:
Dear Tessa,
Thank you for your points of criticism on my blog. But I am not sure that you are aware that I am dyslexic. But you are also right that I write really fast. Most of the time that is because I have other things to do and English is one of the classes that are easy for me. But that is not a good excuse. I just read your script. Sometimes you wrote to fast and you skipped some letters. But the rest of your script is good, and I don’t have any other comments on it. Also I want to say that your product is really original. And it is also something I would really buy. I read your script once more and I saw that your word order. And you sometimes skipped a word, that really as to stand in that place.
Kind regards,
Lisa
Dear Tessa,
First of all thank you for your letter. The be honest I have to say that I started to late on my Families in the Netherlands text. So that is why I made those mistakes. But about all the things you said are right and I should have noticed. But let’s talk about another subject. What do you think about all the terrorist attacks? Are you scared that something like this will happen in our country? And what do you think about the attacks in Brussels? The 2 bombs that went off at the airport and also a few that went off in the underground. But did you hear that one of the bombs that should have gone off but didn’t was one of the worst bombs. Those attacks are so horrible. I hope we never have to go through one of those. I hope to hear your opinion and here from you soon.
Kind regards,
Lisa
Dear Tessa,
First of all I want to say that it is really fun to be pared up with you for a change. You are really good in English and I like your writing skills. And if you are presenting your speaking skills are also very good. I read your travelguide and I have a few things to say. First off your text is really informativ but also boring. And sometimes you are starting to make a joke but then you switch back to the informativ/boring side. But yeah you did not choose your own subject so. But the rest of you task is beautiful said. Like I said before I love you writing style becayse it is very easy to read, so I mean with that not diffcult words. Well done with your task and I look forward to reading more.
Kind regards,
Lisa
Letter 2:
Dear Tessa,
Thank you for your points of criticism on my blog. But I am not sure that you are aware that I am dyslexic. But you are also right that I write really fast. Most of the time that is because I have other things to do and English is one of the classes that are easy for me. But that is not a good excuse. I just read your script. Sometimes you wrote to fast and you skipped some letters. But the rest of your script is good, and I don’t have any other comments on it. Also I want to say that your product is really original. And it is also something I would really buy. I read your script once more and I saw that your word order. And you sometimes skipped a word, that really as to stand in that place.
Kind regards,
Lisa
Dear Tessa,
First of all thank you for your letter. The be honest I have to say that I started to late on my Families in the Netherlands text. So that is why I made those mistakes. But about all the things you said are right and I should have noticed. But let’s talk about another subject. What do you think about all the terrorist attacks? Are you scared that something like this will happen in our country? And what do you think about the attacks in Brussels? The 2 bombs that went off at the airport and also a few that went off in the underground. But did you hear that one of the bombs that should have gone off but didn’t was one of the worst bombs. Those attacks are so horrible. I hope we never have to go through one of those. I hope to hear your opinion and here from you soon.
Kind regards,
Lisa